tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3094516945169073652.post5025078119358074408..comments2022-11-17T03:39:27.283-05:00Comments on camel attack!!!: 7 poems - 7 days - Day 7 REDUXUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3094516945169073652.post-46682357087382021002011-03-29T13:24:21.194-04:002011-03-29T13:24:21.194-04:00I like that new "an opiate's stories"...I like that new "an opiate's stories" line because of how it alludes to religion as the opiate of the masses, which in context is an awfully nice trick. Also a fan of the white bread sandwiches addition as a nice, specific detail. I (still? can't remember) find parts of the first half of the last stanza confusing, but overall the 'steering' and control here are tremendously improved. Good piece for a reading, if you're ever in a position to need one. <br /><br />- Meghan HAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com